Outstanding story! I was locked in on every paragraph, in a unique setting that really felt alive. Perfect pacing and clarity. My biggest complaint here is honestly that there are no pictures of the crabs in the moodboard; I'll be surprised if this one isn't a winner.

A very strong jam entry - you created a fleshed-out character and made good use of small namedrops and asides to show the reader that your story is taking place in a much larger world. Nice job!

Hey dude! You've crafted a gripping and intense story that really captures the harsh reality of a grimdark future. I loved the psychological depth you gave to Darad and the way you portrayed the punishment battalion's dire situation. The tension was palpable, and the twist with Myles was heartbreaking. With just a bit more polish on the transitions, this story would shine even brighter. Keep up the great work—your knack for storytelling is clear!

'Save his honor!'

'Nah.'

Well done. Rarely do we see the perspective of the conscripts. Red Star!