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Wow, thanks Gunrat! You guys are so positive! I appreciate you taking the time. As for the crabs, I will attempt to upload a picture of (literally) the crabs that my little plastic Darad fights. One is a hermit crab as you can see.

That is very kind of you to say. I appreciate the note.

Thanks! Yeah, I wish I had given it a day and done a rewrite. There's one paragraph in the middle that kept me up last night. Lesson learned. Thank you for your kind words.

Thanks for reading!

I thought it was more realistic. I knew an LT like that. Thanks for the comment!

This one was fun

Superb. Great concept and brilliant execution.

professional job, and reads as if written by a veteran

Brilliant concept!

I REALLY liked this one.

I really enjoyed the perspective shift.

This reads like a pro wrote it, and has my vote for first prize. I want to know what happens next.

I really liked the "But we are free" moment. Unexpected.

Very unique perspective. I enjoyed it.

Cool to see a story from HQ's perspective. Very original twist.

Fun! I liked nutriloaf. I hope Rookie has good health insurance.

Fun! I liked nutriloaf. I hope Rookie has good health insurance.

I LOVED this one. Great world building! Low on exposition! Great angle! Great dialogue! Lots of wit! This one is a contender. Well done!

I liked the heist angle. Fun!

I think this is submitted as a game, not a book. Would love to read it.

I think this is submitted as a game, not a book. Would love to read it.

Nice world building

Nice world building