It felt like very little happened and too much was reiterated, still any story about Havoc Dwarves is a good one to me!

It was a decent story, but one of the issues I had with the story is I feel I was just told everything but I wasn't shown anything. I didn't feel any real action, just standing around and being told what was going on. We are told they can't make it in but why? We are told the situation is hopelessly but why is it? Why did he feel the situation was hopeless? I hope that makes sense. 

An excellent story! Very well built charecters 

haven’t seen many Havoc dwarfs. I really like how you wrote them and their interaction with the orca.