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OPR Writing Jam #11

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A jam submission

The cost of Eternal peace (AoF)View project page

A short story about the Eternal Wardens of the houses of the Bollian Elder and the Lunar Pool
Submitted by Dranadon — 2 hours, 57 minutes before the deadline
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The cost of Eternal peace (AoF)'s itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concepts & Originality#223.6943.789
Overall#343.1983.281
Flow & Clarity#362.8732.947
Adherence to Theme#383.0273.105

Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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GunnratSubmitted155 days ago

I don't really know anything about this faction, but this story did a great job introducing their essence. It might be a little long worded, but its well written and keeps you engaged through the whole battle.

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A Rouge Dwarf in Queen Piper's Court
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GreenskinApeSubmitted155 days ago

Great job on this! I don't think the Wardens get enough love and there is so much scope to develop them, and you did just that! The imagery you portrayed was great.

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A F-Orc in the Road
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DranadonDeveloper155 days ago

thanks! I’m new to OPR but the wardens immediately stole my interest and I love the lord that’s percent and there is so much room for intrigue and depth to them. 

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Old_One_EyeSubmitted157 days ago

Hey there! I loved the epic scale of your story and the intense atmosphere you created with dragons and battlefields. Your world feels rich with history, and I’m intrigued by the lore behind the Warden and the Alabaster City. 

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Plan B: BOOM!
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DranadonDeveloper155 days ago

thank you! The lore only hints at what could be happening on OPRs website so I tried to give it more depth while engaging the reader. I’m glad you liked it! I loved yours as well! It really encapsulated the desperation of the grim dark future with some wonderful humor to contrast it. 

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