A lovely story! Very well described combat, I could almost FEEL it from reading it. Good job!
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A F-Orc in the Road's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #9 | 3.885 | 3.885 |
| Overall | #17 | 3.641 | 3.641 |
| Adherence to Theme | #21 | 3.462 | 3.462 |
| Concepts & Originality | #28 | 3.577 | 3.577 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The italics on quotations made me think they were just thoughts at first. The cliff hanger ending was cool and I liked the orc characterization
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A Rouge Dwarf in Queen Piper's CourtThe italics on quotations made me think they were just thoughts at first. The cliff hanger ending was cool and I liked the orc characterization
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A Rouge Dwarf in Queen Piper's CourtLove Orcs, love Dwarves. Fantastic story.
In particular I liked the description of Orcs going more brown with age and young Orcs being considered 'ripening'. It gave the exact concept without further explanation. Really well done.
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One Last ChanceSome awesome imagery in this piece! The second-to-last paragraph is an excellent setup... but also excellent suspense. Well written!
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The Portal OpensNice call back to the old ER'We Go Ork books on lifecycle (or at least it looked like it), good read!
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Hyve PlagueYou crushed the title, Greenskin. And the flow of the story was excellent. The ending felt a tad on the nose, but otherwise I dig it. Plus, good to see the grudge lives on.
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Enemy of my EnemyFirst off, incredible title. Most creative I have seen so far. As for the story, it was very well written. I loved how much you captured Orc energy and mindset. You stuck to the theme too, but I would advise against using the exact theme word for word at the end. Great story!
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A Dusty DemiseI enjoy the characterization of the boss and how you wrote the orcs in a non-Warhammer way and how you worked in the dwarf-orc rivalry.
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Falling Apart
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