OPR Writing Jam #11

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OPR Writing Jam 11 One Page Story. HDF

Submitted by Overwatch2024 — 1 minute, 40 seconds before the deadline

Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Really well polished piece, had some Aliens vibe as well which might be from GW and new Alien trailer spot I just saw :)

Submitted

Thank you!

Another appreciator of the decked out veteran squad I see. Good taste!

Submitted

Thanks! I wanted a real boots on the ground feeling.

professional job, and reads as if written by a veteran

Submitted

Thank you! I want to flesh out the rest of the story.