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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Composition | #3 | 4.613 | 4.613 |
Impression | #7 | 4.323 | 4.323 |
Overall | #10 | 4.245 | 4.245 |
Quality | #10 | 4.484 | 4.484 |
Creativity | #32 | 3.871 | 3.871 |
Correlation to theme | #35 | 3.935 | 3.935 |
Ranked from 31 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
In a world where time materialises as a rare, sand-like dust, each individual possesses an unknown quantity of time that defines the length of their life. The Time Palace stands at the heart of this realm, housing at its center the Fountain of Youth, source of all time. Protected by powerful time-bending entities known as the Keepers of Causality, the Time Palace remains shrouded in secrecy.
Amidst this world, an organisation called the Time Stealers emerges. They steal slivers of time from "time sprouts" on the outskirts of the Palace, and distribute them to those in need – the dying, the sick, and the poor.
Our protagonist is a member of the Time Stealers, and the story begins during a routine "time heist". However, driven by a vision of a loved one's demise, the hero decides to ventures deeper into the "Corridors of the Time Palace".
As they dive deeper through the intricate corridors of the Palace, they encounter a "Keeper of Causality". A gigantic entity resembling an hourglass and formed from intricate gears and wheels making regular clock and winding sounds. And although it fiercely defends the inner gates of the Palace, our hero surprisingly manages to make it through. And as they pass the gate, a sentence appears on the arch: "Everything happens for a reason", and the Keeper of Causality stops chasing him.
Reaching the central area of the Time Palace, the hero stands before "The Fountain of Youth", with flowing sands that reflect the warm light of day, undulating and whispering their hypnotising melody. Surrounded by a lush forest of crystallised flowers and plants, the hero focuses on their mission: gather enough time to spend the rest of their life with their loved one. But the Fountain holds a secret – time grants not the wish people desire but rather what they deeply fear the most. It just so happens that in most cases, in their desperation to avoid death, people unknowingly fear life, leading to a cursed gift of eternal living, hence the name everyone gave to the Fountain of Youth.
Confronted by the overwhelming power of the Fountain, the hero realises that their true fear actually lies in not cherishing the time they could have spent with their loved one. Upon this realisation, the hero is sent back in time, to the day they first had their vision. Armed with this knowledge, they now face their challenging futur, embracing the present instead of fleeing from their fears by seeking ways to mend the situation.
Message from the artist:
I used Logic Pro as my DAW and BBCSO Orchestra plugin for all the orchestral instruments. For the synths and sound design I used PhasePlant and Alchemy.
I had especially a lot of fun writing the flute parts and mixing slower moments with fast paced sections (a flute player or 2 might have perished from asphyxia while playing these parts lol).
More broadly, I also feel like I'm starting to get the gist of how I want to blend organic and synthetic elements in my music.
Ironically, I was struggling a bit with time since I was wrapping up another music project, so I didn't really develop all the musical ideas I wanted nor finish polishing (I find the mix particularly muddy), but I really liked the ideas of the sounds and game concept I came up with.
As always this Jam was an absolute blast and I can't wait for the next one!
Theme:
How does it fit the theme?
It's the story of a hero standing alone against time-bending entities to regain the time needed to save their loved one.
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLMS7LFMUnM4d4VBxcuTH3984q7-yPmOUR
https://soundcloud.com/gornemant_music/sets/whispers-of-sands-ost?si=aa22cb057d254bd19c45e482e869e172&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
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Comments
Whispers of Sands: Love the opening with the flutes! The drums are nice, though it would’ve been kind of cool if they slowly got louder as in a song like Pilgrim (Andor OST). Love the strings around 1:34! From experience I know it can be hard to layer orchestral sounds but I think you did quite well :)
Keepers of Causality: The feel of this one is so imposing (as you intended). I love how the strings buildup in the first minute, and the explosion of sound around the 1:00 mark is amazing! The chords and melody are great. I can see how you might have been concerned about muddiness with everything overlapping, but again, I think the sounds are mostly clear.
The Fountain of Youth: Firstly, I love the story for this song, such a fascinating twist to the overall story. This is my favorite track too, the staccato strings and how they keep changing speed, then how they get louder at the end…it just washes over me.
You’re really good at buildups and releases of energy, which is such an important part of making orchestral music. I’d absolutely love to play this game and/or watch this short film lol, you’ve made such a solid soundtrack. Great work!
Thanks a lot for your in depth comment! I just had a listen to "Pilgrim" and, a part from being really really good music, I see what you're talking about with the drums, I really like the effect!
Corridors of the Time Palace: This has such an epic sound. I love the French Horns/brass and the choir. The flute melody is also very well-written. You have also mixed this very well and have the perfect amount of reverb. Excellent first track!
Keepers of Causality: I love how this track starts small but then builds to a colossal sound of brass. This is very cinematic and would work very well in an epic movie using the story you wrote.
The Fountain of Youth: I really like the panned clinking and wind sound effects. This is also an epic climax to your OST. My favorite part is the reversed effect on the French Horns at the end - so cool!
Overall: You have such a good idea for the story of your OST and it is well written in the description, and even more impressive is your ability to tell that story through your music. This is masterful work and I really enjoyed listening to it. Excellent job and thank you for sharing!
Thank you for your insight and detailed comment, I really appreciate it! It was fun sprinkling around this little reversed french horn sample haha
I already see it in the top submissions. The orchestra sounds very realistic. I appreciate that you said what plugin you used because I'm using Logic too and was searching how to make an orchestra sound good on DAW. :)
Thanks for listening I really appreciate it! The free version of the BBC Symphonic Orchestra is a an excellent VST if you're starting out in orchestral writing!
Outstanding work! I absolutely loved the mystery and intrigue in each piece, and the sound design really complemented your wonderful writing. The story is infused into each piece; I had fun picking out the different elements of the story. I only wish I could've heard more!
Thank you so much for listening, I'm glad you liked it! 🙂
I guess Anakin Skywalker would not like it but I definitely did! :D
Corridors of the Time Palace - the flute is mesmerising!
Overall very cinematic, wide and professional sound! Interesting storyline! Thanks for sharing with us! :)
Yeah I bet he wouldn't hahaha Thanks a lot for your comment!
Corridors of the Time Palace: This is so grand. Great composition and quality. Those flute lines are so cool. I love the buildup at 1:24, very well executed with that bass.
Keepers of Causality: This is cool, it really makes me think of Motoi Sakurabas work (a composer who is my biggest inspiration). Very tense stuff, makes me think of a Dark Souls boss battle theme.
The Fountain of Youth: This is a very magical sound, and I really like the story associated with it. I like the continuous buildup into the grand ending.
Great work!
Thanks a lot! I'm glad the Dark Souls boss vibe went through in "Keepers of Causality" since it's the inspiration I had in mind when writing it 🙂