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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Use of Theme | #3 | 4.231 | 4.231 |
| Audio | #3 | 3.846 | 3.846 |
| Narrative | #6 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Use of Diversifiers | #9 | 3.231 | 3.231 |
| Gameplay | #9 | 3.462 | 3.462 |
| Fun | #11 | 3.538 | 3.538 |
| Art | #12 | 3.462 | 3.462 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Was this created as a solo or team effort?
Solo
Did you use diversifiers?
Pride Flag Colours
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Yes
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I found the project itself to be very interesting. I like it a lot when a genre is recontextualized. The only note is related to the relationship between rhythm and readability: depending on personal skill there may be moments in which you don't hit a green brick for a while or you take a couple of them in a row. In the first case, given the structure of the sentences and the attention paid to the gameplay part, there is the risk of losing the thread of the discussion. In the second case, you may lose a sentence because you don't have enough time to read it, as it's superimposed on the next one. I guess it's not easy to calibrate such a thing but it's a nice project and that's why I'm sure it deserves that little extra attention.
Easy to understand gameplay, and a powerful message (and I love how the gameplay perfectly fits the message!) Love it!
WHY DIDN'T I think about Breakout in an irregular layout? Super cool idea. I wasn't able to read the dialogs in the later levels because I was staring at the little white ball. Maybe a VO can help with this.
Thank you I was proud of figuring out I could use breakout this way. And thanks for the feedback with the dialog!
Nice puzzle-like game, beautiful and intriguing!
Thanks! Love to hear it
Simple but very effective!
Thank you!
Very artistic! The game was satisfying but not super involved, but great use of not going anywhere.
Artistic's what I aim for!
This game narration was great. Minimalistic graphics and audio fitted very well with the game concept!
Thanks I'm glad!
Very interested game, with some really good themes <3
Thank you I'm glad you think so!
That was really interesting. I really liked the atmosphere created by the sound design and the clean visuals. But it was a bit difficult for me to focus on the text, since the bouncy ball always grabbed my attention away from it. Maybe it would work well with a voice-over narration? Anyway, great job!
Thank you! And good to know I hadn't considered a voice over narration!