I played the game and got one of what I think are multiple endings, the game is kinda rough around the edges (Understandable for a game made in a couple of days, even amazing), specially in the text and the plot but it's interesting and very fun till the ending, granted I didn't understand much of what was happening but it's intriguing. Can't wait to see what becomes of this game with future updates. Great job.

Okay, where do I start.

The opening scene was the best part. The reporter sounded real and I was engaged. AI powered voice lines for the reporter was the right choice. But for the human characters, it just drags me out of the game. It sounds soulless and monotone. But I guess that's the downside of AI text to speech.

The maps are nice to look at. But does not reward exploration. For instance, the 1st map, the house, looks really nice. I want to go around and look around the house but nothing is interactable. Maybe add some lines for some items in the house like, "an old photo of me and Neeta at the beach. That was a unforgettable evening" or "leftover pasta in the fridge. Maybe dad is going to cook it for tonight". This would make exploration much more interesting. 

On a side note, some furniture/sprites are placed on the wall. I'm sure this was intentional (to save space?), but for me it slightly effects the atmosphere of the room. It look like wallpaper instead haha

Moving on, there are no transitions when we switch maps. We always teleport from one room to another room. This saves time, but it has a very huge impact on the immersion. Every time it happens, it confuses me and brings me out of the game world. A solution would be an outside world to explore, or a quick transition scene. 

The dialogues are ok, but slightly weak. Some proofreading is required as some lines are weird. I have to say it was definitely rushed. Take some time to build up the world and characters to be more believable. For now, all the characters are unconvincing. Example, the interrogation scene between the sheriff and Amez. It felt so rushed. I felt like the sheriff wasn't doing his job properly. He needs to ask and interrogate more.

The girl in the cafe is so weird. Out of nowhere, the MC immediately trusts this girl. Like, "oh you know my name? Oooh its because you have this power to know the history of items". Also, I wished I could talk to other people in the cafe.

After that is the hospital scene I think. I quit the game for awhile because I was stuck haha. It was really a pain to press everything in the hospital just to find out " its locked".  And the slow walking makes it even worse. A dash option would be good.

After finding his girlfriend was cheating on him, the MC says that he still loves her, not even affecting him in the slightest. This was totally unbelievable. The MC always says the he loves Neeta with all his  heart, but that's all he ever says. It doesn't make me believe him. Give a better reason, like "she was there for me even at my worst moments.", "she helped me when I was at rock bottom" "she loves me like no else, she's the one for me". Something with more detail that may convince the player that he actually loves her.  Not just " I love her as much as I love myself". 

Going back to the hospital scene, after pressing everything, I finally found out I needed to press Neeta's computer. And then after that, the boss's room is not locked anymore? Very weird and frustrating. I lol'ed when the boss teleported to me. I want to say you did not had the time to put in the walking animation, but it would make more sense if he actually teleported because of what happens next. The MC is teleported/brought/dragged to a very creepy place. I thought the boss had some kind of super power or something. 

The flashlight mechanic was pretty cool and interesting. But the walk speed was a pain. Additionally, I wish there were doors or indicators to show which paths are doors. For instance, there were 3 doors at creepy hospital scene, but only the middle one was passable. I don't wanna walk slowly to everything just to find out its uninteractable. 

A great addition would've been a goal/task/mission indicator. Most of the time I thought I was done with the place but it doesn't let me exit, so I have to go back and explore. (Most notably the hospital scene)

The story feels rushed (gameplay wise also). The sheriff caught the MC and puts him in jail, but the MC immediately escapes. The red lady sitting on the throne, the girl at the cafe, the scene at the MCs girlfriend house and the ending.

The scene at the Neeta's apartment was boring. I had to walk up slowly to every door, finding out its locked, and the last door is the correct door. (Lucky me) Again, I wish the doors had indicators, or actual doors, so I know whats what.

The MC also does not known where  his girlfriend lives and he's never been there. While slightly weird, its still believable. The MC goes to the safe, to find out that Neeta may still be alive. Wait how? I want details and explanation of what he found. Not just the conclusion of it. 

Again, the MC is teleported to the hellish world. The MC seems pretty chill with it. As the user Beregon perfectly summarise it "just another flat tire situation for Amez" 😆 

This part was a lot of walking in the dark.. Slowly... through maze-like layouts in a very creepy place. Sounds good on paper, but turns out to be tedious instead. Oh, and now I have a gun and a bullet out of nowhere. I guess I got it from Neeta's safe? 

On a side note, the inventory system is functional. But wish I could click on items to find out more info/details.

After walking around aimlessly, the MC finally meets the bad guys, the people behind the murders. Who are they? I have no idea, but Amez certainly knows them. 

3 guys in hoodies. Is it Doctor S, the cafe girl, and the red lady? Or maybe the dad too as he was pretty weird. And then boom, Amez just shoots all of them and gets back together with Neeta. A simple and happy ending for Amez, or is it?

Maybe Amez was captured by the hooded people and put into an everlasting dream just to have his body be sacrificed in a ritual to the Red Lady. Or was he captured by Doctor S with his powers and is now being under messed upped experiments. 

I have to say, the ending was anti climatic and unsatisfying. I'm still not sure what was the "twist". Was it the red lady? Or the hooded people? Or the hellish world Amez goes in. Is the hellish world all just part of Amez's imagination as he is going insane because he lost the love of his life? 

None the less, the game was mediocre at best for me. The story could've made more sense if there weren't so many teleportations and skips. At first I was hooked by the story as I wanted to know what happened to Neeta. But ultimately was just confused and disappointed in the end. 

Take your time on your next game. Make the NPC's unique and believable , make the world interesting and fun to explore, take time on the writing and story. Slowly build up the dialogues, don't just hit us with conclusions.

You have amazing potential. You just need to put more time into it and plan everything out more. I look forward to your next game Ikmal!

The movement is painfully slow and the characters all sound like emotionless robots. The text really needs some proofreading and grammar correction because it sounds completely unnatural.

The teleportation type travel feels really weird.

Chairs are really weird with the actors looking like they are standing behind/on the chairs. A lot of objects are fused to the walls and it looks weird. 

The office sort of glitches where it says interact, but nothing happens.

Looking at the desk from below causes you to teleport to the chair while still facing up. Looks really odd.

The game says house, but it is an apartment. This is kind of confusing due to the lack of nameplates/numberplates to read so you are guessing which is the right door.

You don't see any of what the character sees in certain interactions, so it is completely confusing. What was in her diary, for example.

The teleporting between worlds just feels weird when there really isn't any sort of explanation. One moment you are talking to someone then next moment, you are somewhere else perfectly prepared. It just feels more like cut corners than anything. The plot just seems to jump all over the place and you are just left in the dark. This felt more like content was cut out or just never worked on like as if multiple stories were just thrown together.

Very interesting game, I liked how you used the AI to read the lines, also the moving water and the custom menu are pretty cool. I'm still playing to figure out who actually killed his girlfriend so have to let you know when I solve it :D

Alright, this game was interesting and there's a lot it does right and even some of the things I have problem with are neat in the sense that I can certainly appreciate the attempt. EDIT: I've managed to get past the part I got stuck at. I've been enjoying it so far.

Now for the presentation aspect. The title screen and the opening are both great and set the mood. However, the voice acting and dialogue have issues. The reporter is fine, but the rest of the character sound like robots. At first, I thought it was text to speech instead of voice acting. There's no emotion to them, they are just reading their lines. Well, the main character sounds vaguely cheerful most of the time (odd, considering that his girlfriend was murdered a week ago), but that's it. The dialogue was also written by someone who has english as their second language, which results in a lot of weird lines. It seems like you are watching a story about aliens trying to mimic human society instead of it feeling natural.

But there's a lot of potential there. Rewrite the dialogue and get it proofread, then redo the voice acting and it could be really awesome. Also, make the MC be atleast a bit sad about his girlfriend's murder. He's pretty cheery despite the fact that his girlfriend he alegedly loves has just been murdered. I'd expect some mourning, especially since it's been only a week since her death. His voice acting as a cheery guy doesn't help in this fact. If this is the way he's supposed to act, I'm not surprised he's the prime suspect.

Anyway, here are my thought's as I was playing it:

So, the main character and his dad have a lovely, cheerful morning a week after the horrific murder of the MC's girlfriend. They also talk about the MC's dead mom in such a way that makes me think like they didn't really care about her. Then the sheriff calls the MC into his office to question him, because he thinks he's the murderer he's looking for. The MC decides to prove his innocence and investigate on his own even before he actually gets to the sheriff's office. Ok, so I guess we leave the house now.

Alright, so when you leave, you are now in some huge room with stairs to the south filled with a bunch of boxes. I guess they live in an apartment complex? But what's with all those boxes? That seems like a pretty big fire hazard. Makes it seem like they live in a warehouse. The game doesn't let me leave, because "I'm not done yet". I try to interact with everything, until I get some letter from a mailbox. Maybe have the main character say something like "I should check the mail first".

After getting the letter going down the stairs of the apartment complex, you are suddently in a restaurant, without any context. As far as you know, Amez is going to the Sheriff's office, but he stops by a restaurant without any real reason provided. Sure, when you get to the counter, it becomes obvious he stopped by to get breakfast (despite his dad apparently being busy cooking in the kitchen, why not eat home), but it's so sudden and he never ends up actually eating there, so it feels out of place.

The scene with the girl behind the counter feels weird. Amez is oddly trusting of her. Maybe make her an old friend of Amez and he's going to confide in her about the accusations. It would make it much more natural, even if she was to turn out to be something else later. Or have her introduce herself as his girlfriend's friend (it doesn't actually have to be true) and that she knows he didn't do it and also wants to find out why, so they should team up.

The locations are way too quiet. I can understand the hallway and MC's home, but the restaurant full of people definitely feels weird, when the only thing you hear are the MC's footsteps. Atleast some music would be nice.

Speaking of things being quiet, the menu could use some sound effects.

Ok, these scene transitions are very confusing, when you leave the restaurant, you wind up at the Sheriff's Office right away, again with zero introduction. It feels like some weird nightmare the MC has more than reality.

The Sheriff's Office has a bunch of tiles glued to the wall that are meant to be placed on the floor tiles. Maybe you could make an argument for the locker, but the desk and the wastebin just look bad this way. I understand what you are trying to do here, but it's not working without some edits.

During the questioning, the Sheriff never asks if he has someone who can confirm his alibi, despite the fact that the MC was alegedly home and lives with his dad. Even if his dad was somewhere else at the time and couldn't confirm it, it would be something that should come up. If the dad "conveniently" wasn't home that night, it could make Amez look even more suspicious in the Sheriff's eyes.

Ok, so after another short scene in the dinner, you are teleported to the hospital. The Nurse asks Amez if he wants to get an appointment with the doctor Neeta used to work under and that's where the conversation ends. Atleast have him decline and maybe think to himself on how to proceed next.

The second floor of the hospital is almost identical to the first one. I get that these places are uniform, but maybe atleast add something there that allows you to distinguish that you actually changed floors. Maybe some potted plant near the stairs.

"Another cringe, that's for sure."...what :D Ok, I laughed at that line, it came out of nowhere :D But if you want the game to be taken seriously, this line should be redone. Maybe use another word instead of cringe.

Ok, so Amez found out that his girlfriend cheated on him, but he doesn't even seem hurt and immediately says he still loves her just as much as before anyway. I find this unbelievable. Hell, this potentially gives him a motive for her murder, he should be atleast slightly worried about that atleast.

There's a door in the hospital the game tells me I can interact with, but when I do, nothing happens. It's the one that should lead to the fancy office with the two couches.