I liked the different factions and interactions between the fey. The riddle of the library required some rereading before I could understand it well enough to present it…and I’m still not sure I’m presenting it as the author intended. It took a bit of rereading to understand how the private tower was reached as well.
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The riddle is a trick. There is no riddle. The fairies there are having a laugh at the PCs, convincing them to waste time in the library.
I may need to make the entry points clearer. On the map it states "Master Bed Staircase: Up to Private Tower" and it mentions being able to climb to the tower as well. I've seen a lot of modules color code points of transition and such and I may begin doing the same.
I liked the different factions and interactions between the fey. The riddle of the library required some rereading before I could understand it well enough to present it…and I’m still not sure I’m presenting it as the author intended. It took a bit of rereading to understand how the private tower was reached as well.
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A Shadowdark ScrapbookExtra points for this sentence: "PC’s awaken in Frostmire after a period of carousel. Whether the PCs were there to begin with is another story. "
This is Shadowdark stuff lol.
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Grove of the Bark WitchI like the castle and the factions therein; and while I like the hook (PCs cursed by offended fairy), it feels a little distracting -- I might save that for a later adventure. I might also tweak a bit of the story/character description, e.g., Melendrin is described as childish and petty in the capsule description, but then in the adventure, he gives a lot of information and agrees to help pretty readily.
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Silver Paths in the Night GardenThe curse being as distracting as it is somewhat ameliorated by the fact that the dungeon itself doesn't ask *too* much of the PCs.
I might amend Melendrin's description to reflect that centuries as a ghost has made him more amenable, but he isn't actually more reasonable or less childish. His willingness to help is purely self-serving and should still be role played as described, but your criticisms are valid. I'll update the file after the votes are in. I'm not sure I can make all the changes I'd like and keep it under 8 pages.
And thank you for the feedback. I generally consider criticism more valuable than praise (though praise is certainly welcome).
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