I was attracted by the visual presentetion first and then hooked up by the intro scene! Good job! I love the looking around system you built, reminded me a bit of Paranormasight.

The suspense felt like a mix between a Chilla's Art game and a game called "Hollow Cocoon" in all the best ways. The gameplay kept you engaged by mixing up choice menus, the cell phone, and reading notes. The visuals made it feel a little like an interactive movie game. Consider adding creepy music throughout "happy scenes" - it'll be creepier to hear when characters are smiling/plot has no suspensful content - the pop music threw off any built up suspense.