I enjoyed this tutorial and felt that the writing descriptions  within the mini-game were a real strength. It would be fun to see an extended adventure by this author. The tutorial was extensive and I wondered if those who don't like reading (who obviously aren't always the best fit for text adventures!) might find the amount of text too much at times. But overall a really solid implementation with a lot of skill in the coding and design side.

I really enjoyed playing this one: The descriptions were rich and really set the scene, even taking me back to my grandmother's cottage (now bulldozed with a giant modern house sprawling  on top of half the garden) where there was a collection of knick-knacks which included a Toby jug.

For improvements, I found that the tutorial did not entirely fit my laptop screen, so I was moving between the input at the bottom and the output at the top. The maze bit also felt too complex for the game to come, but the documentation was thorough, with clear instructions and a map for players to easily get around.