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• Nice visuals, nice step by step showing of things on the screen
• Nice sfx
• I'm missing music :)
• I love the visuals if the town and how it's put together
• It's pretty hard when not seeing much of the screen, I feel like the additional sight raduis, when picking up lights is going down way to quickly
• Most times in a mace level, I pick it up, backtrack the way I came from and the raduis is almost back to normal, so they don't feel that useful
• The with the vertical rays which deal damage is pretty hard, to the point were it became frustrating. I tried hiding behind a tree, but with susch a small raduis of sight is to hard to even get from one to the next tree. And then the vertical ray seemly come out of nowhere, hit you twice instantly, dead. The player needs anticipation of danger.
• I did use the reveal of the screen, but it's still hard. With the cooldown time I wonder do you want the reveal to only be used once per level? Then it should stay longer on or reduce the cooldown so it can be used more often.
• However I had to hold the level in my memory, but when moving there is no way of orientation. Little more indications in the level could help. This can lead to a feeling of unfairness, because the player doesn't information to react up on.
  
• Refine some of the rought edges, this has great potential!

An interesting story focused game.  Not usually my thing, but I enjoyed my brief time with it.  The light-collecting aspect of the game was a good take on the theme, although it could really lead to a bit of a vicious cycle, especially in later levels, where because you couldn't see very far it was impossible to find more light.  This was also the reason I didn't really use the time-stop ability; I felt my vision of the level was more valuable than making obstacles easier to avoid.  Some of the later levels seemed to give you very little light to work with and many obstacles, and I'm not sure how I would even go about using the time stop effectively in those levels considering the lack of light pickups.  Also, I know it's standard that pulp games require a press for each move but I would have liked the ability to hold a direction to keep moving.  Still, I think the writing was pretty good and I enjoyed the story of the game.  It's always fun to see what gets made in pulp, and even if this doesn't break the general pulp vibe like some games do it's a fun and unique experience in its own right.