AUGH I set myself up for a double date by accident but oh good they're bonding over the end of the world crisis averted. phew. Having a great time and thinking about this game in my sleep.
p.s. did you want feedback about typos and stuff, and hows the best way to deliver it if so?
75 days ago (+2)
BETTER TO DREAM OF LLRPG THAN TO DREAM OF THE BLADE WINGED RAVEN.
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75 days ago(+1)
Alright! Some may be me misreading things but here goes so far! everyone else look away from spoilers
-intro, 'purfume'
-Walking with Sinner in the woods, 'segway(tm)' instead of 'segue', either a word (probably 'hand' or 'arm') is missing in the bit where she puts it on the tree.
-Quest for In Light of the Seventh. Simmer and sinner might need swapping? Anyway for such a large amount of writing, its remarkable theres only so few typos (though getting clobbered with one right out the gate is a bit heheh)! Its all Ive found so far. Lovin the game and the weird offputting ladies therein.
75 days ago(+2)
LAST ONE IS INTENTIONAL BECAUSE IM KINDA 'WACKY' AND SILLY, BUT I'LL ADD THE OTHERS TO MY PATCH NOTES 'DANKE'
Hiya, back with a few more. 
Sinner's Apartment 'hans'-> 'hands'.
Lady Moonshine 'in't' accent or typo?
Eiffel Table purchase, 'slither' -> 'sliver'
Exploring Bluehills 'cities' -> 'city's'?
Still having an amazing time, good laughs as well as oof gut punches. <3
Are the game mechanics gotten into anywhere? Like what causes successes/ fails, can you improve your chances, etc? I cant see anywhere to put on my silk kimono to improve my drama!
Thankies!
Also a few more to add to the list.
edit:added three more:
Nasty Girl says Lets get 'too' it, should be 'to' when fixing the roof.
Weapon says 'slither' -> 'sliver' twice in interviewing him.
Same in Writer's apartment, coughing up a 'slither'
Lovely Lady says 'segway' again when you talk to the Pulp Writer in her apt. -> Segue
Shop, Eating cereal, 'it takes of sugar and lead' takes->tastes.
AMOD zone, concrete seems to be split into 'conc rete'.
Searching the woods for the shrine. 'for an especially interpret' -> intrepid?
Talking to Raven in shop when she preempts Nasty Girl's suggestion, Ravens and Nasty Girls missing apostrophes. 
Caution There Be Spoilers Ahead
I also found one in the scene where you are playing board games with The Weapon it says, "Do we every interact with each other in this game?"
Also I don't know if this was intentional but after writing the war story for the Pulp Writer as my last action for that day, the next days I was never prompted to give it to her (when I reloaded and didn't write the story i had the option to go apologize to her). Do you have to turn in the story the same day you write it?
