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Hi! Here’s mine if you’ve got time, please be as honest as possible cause I am quite aware it’s not great >:P

https://phosphorus-cat.itch.io/ferosystema

Hi! Thanks for sharing your game!

Positives:

  1. Great boomer shooter style. I love this style and similar games.
  2. The gas mechanic is a good idea—it creates an immediate sense of anxiety, as if something is about to attack.
  3. I liked the focus on sound orientation, but I’m not sure if enemies need bells. Maybe just footsteps and growls would make them scarier.

Negatives:

  1. I know it’s classic, but this might be personal preference—vertical mouse control would allow for a more detailed exploration of the environment.
  2. Enemies die in a strange way, as if they’re kneeling. I’m unsure if this is intentional, but if so, an explanation could add intrigue.
  3. Unfortunately, the monsters all look the same. It would be great to have more dangerous or at least visually varied enemies, as encountering new opponents motivates players to keep going.
  4. The game is a bit too easy. Even when I ran out of ammo at the end, I could simply avoid enemies to finish the game. This lack of challenge makes health items feel unnecessary, as I didn’t use them at all. Consider making enemies faster and craftier, adding traps like floors that drop players into a crowd of monsters, introducing melee weapons, and reducing ammo while compensating with pistol damage. Don’t be afraid to challenge the player.
  5. The game is too short. I was disappointed when I reached the end screen so quickly. I enjoyed exploring the strange industrial environment, which had its own charm, but the game’s abrupt end cut this short.

Conclusion: The game could benefit from more development time and additional content, but it already has a solid foundation! I enjoyed wandering through the factory and would love to see more interesting places or even characters to interact with. With improved controls, more varied enemies, and a stronger challenge, the game would truly shine and be fantastic!

Thanks for the game!