Other misspellings. The various forms use the same text template? If not, wolf, manticore, salamander, cat, squirrel, and slime need to be fixed.
I disagree, considering the wolf form. Also cat and angel.
That one is used in quite some forms:

Is it deliberate not allow Nana to return as fallen kitsune?
What trial and error? How to use a cell phone?
The comma brigade:

Apparently Nana can't even see her angel form in the mirror, or this would not work like that.

No spaces.






Moving into orphanages is a strange thing to do. Those are for children and the staff only, right?






Pretty sure that this is not supposed to be in the owl ending. Could please post the text which should be there?

















