Well lets get my criticism out of the way:
- The hitbox of the object are smaller than it should, causing the experience to not feel so smooth
- The soft-locking is also a major problem but I do notice that you already plan to solve it in the page
- I feel like there should be something that diverge from Paper Please gameplay-wise
That being said, making a game as good looking as the original artist post and as close to faithful to Paper Please within just 2 weeks is impressive! I feel like after the Jam ended and you guys put some time ironing out the issues this would be amazing fan game! Amazing work for presenting this game to the Jam!