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It’s great that you created all the art yourself, and the art was coherent and clear enough to follow the story. The (depressed) mood of boredom and wasting time was conveyed very well. The crumpling paper effect at the end was a nice touch. It might have been even more impactful if it lasted a bit longer to emphasize the passage of time, but even as it is, it worked well.

A solid entry for this cutscene jam. Keep up the good work!

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Thank you for the detailed feedback, it is much appreciated!! Interesting idea about letting the scene play out longer before the paper crumple effect, I was worried about making the viewer bored by dragging the scene out but I think you are right that it would have driven home the feeling of despaired monotony even more.  I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed my scene, thank you for hosting and watching my entry!