Cool use of shaders, you have talent with animation. I'd make the main gameplay first next time, get the gameplay loop down, then work on cutscenes and stuff if you have time.
I planned to do it in parallel, and the top view of the ships in the sky was going to be the gameplay but since I was figuring out importing, textures (the pilot and hangar are untextured actually), light, camera and everything couldnāt manage my time right. Lesson learned.
