I had a great time following this game's progress on Discord and the art great, though the actual implementation of the game could use some polishing. As I know others have said, music and sound effects for when the people are sucked to the great beyond would make it a lot more fun and immersive.
I ran into a bug in the third shift where I could not put the document in the envelop, so I can only assess the plot and logic up to that point, so please forgive me anything later in the game negates some of my critique.
For assessing the people, the initial cross system was okay, but adding in documentation got really confusing, especially since everyone has basically the exact same super long list of auto generated great and terrible things. It basically sounded like they all did superficial things to look good, like support their church and volunteer at homeless shelters, but behind closed doors they were using violence to assert dominance, spreading malicious gossip, taking advantage of vulnerable people, etc. If the lists were a little shorter and had a less even split between "good" and "bad" actions, it would have felt like I was actually able to assess just how much bad vs good they did and pick accordingly, as opposed to just sending everyone to Hell.
Anyway, I do think this is a still a neat concept and I'm glad to see you were able to complete your game for the jam :)