Hey there, glad you like my posts :). Story-wise, it's intended to make MC look lost. He's totally unsure on how to proceed, what happened with Lilith, what to do next after he didn't find anything in that side street, where to go now, everything is a bit overwhelming and he's supposed to get help or figure stuff out while his normal life continues. Hence why I solve this one issue relatively "early", you'll see in the new version.
Some people already seem to have a good idea on how the story will progress, others don't which I think is good. It shouldn't be too obvious, but also not completely mystical so nobody can assume where it goes.
Regarding the girls, glad they're appealing! I didn't go for 'tags', but to include some variation with a tendency to go for a pretty nice overall behavior, to have some nice friends all around. Lucy is indeed a shy one, but that opens possibilities for growth in the future. Amber seems like a nymphomaniac but that opens the possibilities for growth in another way as well. Time will tell, I've all planned already.
Don't worry, criticism is always welcoming! Even I don't see every aspect and might even overlook certain things. Hence why I appreciate it, when people have legit criticism and not just vote a game down because for no reason, this doesn't help at all! :D