I really like it. I love these singleplayer FPSes, and this is a good one with great potential. However, there's issues, firstly, no tutorial, or anything telling you the controls, I spent a few minutes in the starting room figuring out the controls. The enemies also appear to insta-kill you, that's not a good feature, normally, you should die from a few shots, not one.
The concept is very interesting, but there could be some more explanation of why the man is stuck in a cardboard world. Overall, a very good game, with its flaws.
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Hei, happy you liked it. Thanks for the feedback. The lack of tutorials and lack of “Narrative” came from my rather tight time planning. With that said, I could’ve at least wrote some small text about him waking up or something. And Controls could be written down somewhere on a table or something nearby.
Yeah, the health thing, I kinda agree, but I wanted to try it and I also tried to mitigate it, by for one having small levels with predictable enemy placements and showing the player what hit him and then a quick respawn.
Maybe I try to fix a few of those things, in an update. :)