Hey Askman, here are my thoughts:
- Do not completely pause the entire game when a dialogue has finished. Show the player the button he has to press to continue or at least let the music continue playing. I restarted twice because I thought my game crashed ;)
- You write on your post that there is a surprise for those who persevere. I completed the game but it said 'Is that it?' And I died.. If this is the real ending, don't make false promises on your itch page because I was dissapointed when I saw the text bubble.
- I liked the trail you leave behind. Good to remember how you were rewinding.
- When you rewinded the level, you should fast forward to the next so the player does not have to walk the same distance again.
- Add some checkpoints between each level so you can start from there and not all the way from the beginning.
- Nice music choice. I liked the style of it.
Reminded me a bit of 'Frogger' but then with a twist, fitted in the theme. Nice job.