Well done.
I sent you a transcript of a little playthrough I had (via facebook).
Pro-tip: load the transcript into Google Docs (or word, or libreoffice) to find the spelling mistakes (there are a few).
I think you need to see more transcripts to know that.
I think the main problem I had is that I couldn't find any obvious puzzles except for feeding the reindeer and catching the fish. I could find lots of objects. Being aimless is worse than bring stuck. If I missed puzzles to be solved, maybe prod me? Timed prodding?