Pretty alright game, similar to https://itch.io/jam/benbonk-game-jam-3/rate/1106244 this game. The art was a little all over the place but the narration and walkthrough added a sense of polish. Could be more puzzles instead of just precise jumping because the game gave more of a story sense instead of precise platformer. The music had water at the start which was weird but it was a premade so can't help that. Other than that, a good concept and start for a game jam.
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Thank you for your feedback! I would love more story aspects and a few more puzzles for this game!
When you say that the art was all over the place, what parts felt out of place?
The water running at the start was intentional as there was a puddle of water a little later in the level, but that is a good idea to make the water SFX play once the player gets close. Thank you for your feedback!
I understand our game being similar to other games, but with the theme, this was the idea we came up with without influence from other submissions. With that said, I would like to say that our game has a different feel than others, but again, thank you for your feedback!
Tbh I worded that wrong, the art wasn't inconsistent, just compared to the narrative story, if there was more of a scene instead of straight platforming it would've blended into the story a lot better. Also not saying that it's bad to not have the most unique base concept but just listed it as another thing to add to how I rate a unique game. Good game considering the time limit!