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Thank you for your feedback! I would love more story aspects and a few more puzzles for this game! 

When you say that the art was all over the place, what parts felt out of place?

The water running at the start was intentional as there was a puddle of water a little later in the level, but that is a good idea to make the water SFX play once the player gets close. Thank you for your feedback!

I understand our game being similar to other games, but with the theme, this was the idea we came up with without influence from other submissions. With that said, I would like to say that our game has a different feel than others, but again, thank you for your feedback!

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Tbh I worded that wrong, the art wasn't inconsistent, just compared to the narrative story, if there was more of a scene instead of straight platforming it would've blended into the story a lot better. Also not saying that it's bad to not have the most unique base concept but just listed it as another thing to add to how I rate a unique game. Good game considering the time limit!

Thanks for the clarification! So by more of a narrative scene, are you thinking more along the lines of a visual novel?

A scene as in compared to the still image you used as the background, maybe additional background objects, trees, who knows. Possibly even a mansion kind of scene. Considering the time constraints though, making scenes are a little much, but that's just for future possibilities.

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Oh I see- that was definitely on the to-do list, but yeah, it all came down to core mechanics in the end, but that is certainly something we would like to add to the full game if we come around to completing this game! Thank you!