In Lead the Flock:
A small suggestion: change the trigger to
When you begin to preach to a crowd
That way, it’s clear that the roll happens at the beginning of the sermon, and easier to remember that the hold is to be spent during the sermon, not at the end of it! :)
Also, about Lead the Flock: I have the same feelings about the word “lust” here as I did about “fucking” and “fornicating” in the Minstrel, just much less strongly. Invoking a strong feeling of “lust” is easier to gloss over, but still awkward to have in a game that wants to avoid sexual content (because, you know, lust usually leads to sex, or actions that evoke thoughts of it).
In common English usage, “lust” does not refer to chocolate.
Thanks, that’s good to know! I can remove these parts from the rules when I play with friends.
I am curious: What fantasy stories are you drawing on for Fantasy World where sex is an important part of the story we see? I can’t think of any fantasy stories where sex is mentioned explicitly at all, much less an important part of the story.
The immediate but largely irrelevant answer to your question is... plenty of fantasy novels feature sex. Most of them, I might add.
There is explicit sex in Perdido Street Station, by China Mieville.
And in many books from The Magicians series, by Lev Grossman.
And in some passages of The Kingkiller Chronicle, by Patrick Rothfuss.
And pretty much everywhere in A Song of Fire and Ice, by George Martin.
And here and there in many Cosmere novels, by Brandon Sanderson (I remember at least some in the Mistborn saga, both era 1 and era 2)
There is definitely sex, and quite explicitly so, in the Rivers of London series (by Ben Aaronovitch) and in the Dresden Files series (by Jim Butcher).
There are a few explicit sex scenes in the Broken Earth series, by N. K. Jemisin.
Oh, and there is TONS of sex and actual general debauchery in Elric of Melniboné, by Michael Moorcook.
I hear there is also sex in the classic Conan stories, but I haven't read those, only saw the cheesy (but amazing) movies :P
And oh my gold the sex in The Witcher series, by Andrzej Sapkowski!
And I could go on and on...
Sex was also very much present, albeit never explicitly described, in many classic Forgotten Realms novels by R. A. Salvatore... at least the one involving Drizzt Do'Urden and the Drow underdark society.
There is sexual innuendo pretty much everywhere in the Discworld novels, by Terry Pratchett :D
Etc...
So yeah, if you ask me, there is sex in a LOT of fantasy stories :)
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That said... this matters little for Fantasy World.
To use technical jargon: Fantasy World fosters a narrativist agenda, rather than a simulationist one.
In plainer words: it fosters the kind of fantasy stories that the participants create for themselves, rather than celebrating a specific work or genre by closely adhering to it.
Fantasy World structure is meant to produce dramatic stories where the protagonists are people. It supports this narrative goal by conjuring (through the rules) emergent character arcs and storylines focused on the protagonists Problems and Doubts, and their common goals and hopes and fears... and usually by challenging all of these with the external world surrounding them: the people living in it, those people's own dreams and fears and goals and flaws and virtues.
Stories that revolve around people tend to also revolve around people's relationships with other people. Which often means sex: love, desire, lust, romance, rejection, heartache, hope, etc... all the good stuff. Kingdoms rise and fall for this stuff. Just think about the epic fantasy that was Homer's Iliad :P
That said... while FW is deeply rooted into people... the game is not, in and of itself, focused on "sex".
There are no "sex moves" like in Apocalypse World, for example.
And the only references to sex in the whole book are to be found in the 2 moves you noticed... and they are there because, well, because they represent (like all moves) narrative clichès and stereotypes :P
One allows the PC to use magic and performance art to crank an audience emotions overboard: sex is the most obvious, natural, and expected outcome. The other does exactly the same, but through the use of rhetorics and passion and fervor.
That said, the mere mention of the possibility for sexual content doesn't mean that it has to be present or central at your table. Or that you have to be graphic in expressing it. It's in the moves to remind the Players that the narrative option exists, then trusts them to do whatever they feel like with it.
The TL;DR of below is: It’s helpful to know which fantasy books you’re drawing from for Fantasy World. Leave these parts as they are!
Wow, I haven’t read most of those books! This is a great list. Sounds like I’ve got a lot of fantasy books to read. :)
The immediate but largely irrelevant answer to your question is… plenty of fantasy novels feature sex.
I don’t think this is irrelevant.
Fantasy World fosters a narrativist agenda, rather than a simulationist one.
I know! Like you’ve mentioned elsewhere, narrativist agendas borrow tropes from stories and fiction to build mechanics that emulate certain kinds of stories.
This list is super helpful to me because it made me realize that I thought I knew what kind of fantasy stories you were drawing from, but it turns out I was wrong!
For the stories and tropes you’re emulating here, yes, “fornicating” and “lust” make plenty of sense to have in your game! I had just misunderstood the kind of fantasy you’re emulating here, which I would call “adult fantasy.” Most of the fantasy I’ve read and seen has been, like, “young adult/children’s fantasy,” like Lord of the Rings, Redwall, Howl’s Moving Castle, Ella Enchanted, and lots of others I’ve forgotten the names of.
1) on FW "emulation" goals
2) on the relevance of "sex" in FW and the mentioned fantasy novels
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I'm glad that the list could help you :)
But as I mentioned... FW is really not trying to "emulate" a specific source. Rather, I was dissatisfied with the usual brand of emotionally immature and superficial fantasy adventuring games that were almost exclusively focused on escapism and power trips. I wanted something more humane and multi-faceted, that could also be "fantasy".
So FW does not take inspiration from specific sources, but rather from "fantasy literature in general". More on this can be read in a post I made a while ago on The Gauntlet forum, here.
There I also talk about playing LotR by way of FW.
I am not familiar with Redwall specifically, but maybe you might like the (partial) actual play of the Assassin's Cheese game I played with a group of friends :D
Howl's Moving Castle would be a perfect source of inspiration:
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I think we might be experiencing a couple of communicative disconnects. Let's see if I manage to express myself in a way that makes sense :)
Also... everything I'm about to write is just me trying to clarify what I understood of your messages, and replying to that.
I don't want to put words in your mouth that are not yours. Feel free to correct any part I might have misunderstood ^_^'
Reading your previous posts I got the impression (and maybe I am wrong) that in your eyes merely mentioning the existence of sexuality in a story is a big deal for that story.
If we read a story, and the page says something like "...we could hear them having sex in the other room..." it is a big deal.
If we play FW and thanks to a move a player says "...as my PC speaks, some people in the audience get closer together, holding hands or passing an arm around each other, sharing eloquent looks..." it is a big deal.
I think that there might be a disconnect in this. In how we define what is and what is not a big deal for a story (and a game that produces stories).
To me, sex is NOT a big deal, because it is such a fundamental element of the human experience (and thus the stories we tell about it) that I barely notice it, and it would require specific focus and intention to make it into a big deal, to highlight it as one of the main thematic elements of a story/game.
So I read your posts and I hear "it's a big deal". And in my mind "a big deal" means that sex is central to the gameplay and the stories it creates. In my experience this might look like Apocalypse World, where how a PC experiences their intimacy with others is one of the main themes of the game. Or like Monsterhearts, where discovering your PC's sexuality and relation to gender norms is one of the core focuses of the game. Or like the dumpster fire that was Charm, where the teenage-bait advertisement was all about "this game has sex in it!". Or the bizarre D&D Book of Erotic Fantasy, featuring uninspiring and tactless rules to measure a PC's sexual stamina :P
(2 amazingly positive examples, 2 embarrassingly negative ones, for balance sake)
And to this I say no... FW world is not like that. FW is not about sex. So it's also It's not a big deal ;-)
And I say the same thing about the novels I mentioned before. Sex is not the main focus, so it's not a big deal.
But while writing this I notice how, if one changes perspective, it IS a big deal XD
FW is about people. People relations are largely driven by sex. To me it's invisible, but the moment you try to purge this element from the game... then it becomes a big deal.
And here there might be a second disconnect.
When I talk about "sex" I mean anything "sexual" or that obviously implies it. For example I easily spot sexual content in Howl's story :)
The character of the Witch is portrayed as being obviously lustful for Howl, both for the power he holds, and for his young pretty face. And after she is cursed, a good part of the "fun" of the situation and character specifically comes from the obvious cringe of an old woman hitting on a young man.
Sophie herself deals with more than one sexually charged situation, as she struggles with her feelings of being undesirable. It's a CORE element of that character :)
And the soldiers and young women from the various cities in conflict are often shown as quite obviously being sexually active, and in sexual pursuit of each other.
If you tell me that there is no sex in Howl's story, I say "no, there is".
But because it's not graphic and explicit you say "no, there isn't".
So when in FW you notice something that could potentially lead to an explicit description, and in itself uses explicit words such as "lust" and "fuking", for you it already is a big deal... and you express it... and I react to it using my parameters for what a big deal is to me... and I say that it's irrelevant... and you say "no, it is relevant"... etc ^_^
Interesting analysis... let me know if I have completely misunderstood you and have gone on an hallucinated tangent trip XD
Anyway, this distinction is relevant to me because of what it means.
If sex is not a big deal in FW, then you can ignore it and use the game to play the kind of sex-less stories you want.
If sex is a big deal in FW, then you can't ignore it and you won't be able to play the kind of sex-less stories you want.
To this I can say:
If you are OK with the first point, then I think your group can safely use FW to play any kind of fantasy story they want, no problem.
If you need for graphic sexuality to not be depicted in the game... they can effortlessly do it.
If you need to purge any possible reference to sex from the play content... it's also doable and 100% up to the players.
If you need to purge any possible reference to sex from the game text... that's harder, but doable as there is no pervasive use of such language. But here and there it is present. So you'll have to do some redacting on your side :)
Thanks for the link to the Gauntlet thread! There’s some great context in there.
I have to agree with Froggy in what he said in that thread:
I really think it would benefit the game if you were to put together a list of touchstones and not wishy-wash around the “what type of fantasy” question.
The more I read it, the more I realize that Fantasy World is absolutely trying to emulate a particular kind of fantasy, and I’m realizing my own fantasy biases. When I think of “fantasy,” I realized I’m almost always thinking of “romantic fantasy.” FW does not seem like it will play out romantic fantasy well. You’re going for something more like Game of Thrones, which you mention briefly in the Introduction.
FW is really not trying to “emulate” a specific source.
That’s true, but it’s clearly trying to emulate a specific type of fantasy–one that’s prevalent in many different books, as you listed! I do think it would helpful if you said more about the type of fantasy FW emulates. Listing inspirational books and movies is one way to do that. Saying more about the type of fantasy FW emulates is another way to do that.
Re: sex (much less important)
When I say “sex” in all my posts, I mean explicit sexual intercourse, not sexuality. Hopefully that clarifies some confusion.
When I say “it’s a big deal,” I don’t mean that it’s central to the game, or the main focus. I mean that, if it happens at all (again, explicit sex, not sexual content or innuendo), it’s important, and usually veiled (as in, Lines and Veils).
The Minstrel and Priest moves in question here, have sex (again, intercourse) happening very casually (“and the entire crowd turned into one giant orgy”). Clearly the One Golden Rule could stop this from happening, but it initially seemed awkward to me that it was included as an option for the Minstrel and Priest at all.
Now that I know more about where you’re coming from, and what source works you’re drawing inspiration from, it makes much more sense.
And you’re right, it’s easy to remove, so I’m not worried about it. :)
Hopefully that cleared up any confusions you had! :D
When I think of “fantasy,” I realized I’m almost always thinking of “romantic fantasy.” FW does not seem like it will play out romantic fantasy well.
That's very interesting to me... could you elaborate? :D
What do you mean by "romantic fantasy" and why do you feel that FW doesn't do that well?
Wikipedia offers some info, but I want to be sure about your specific point of view.
(also at this point I have a question for background: have you played FW already?)
Wow, yeah, that Wikipedia page is really short. XD I found this page, which lays out in more detail what I’m thinking of.
Also, as far as Wikipedia pages go, High fantasy is another fantasy type that interests me, and its page is much longer and more detailed.
The thing that ties them together for me, is that, in these stories, the antagonist is usually “evil”–greedy, cruel, arrogant, power-hungry, etc.–if not to their core, then at least in their choices and actions. The protagonists can then work together to make the world a better place. It doesn’t seem like that’s what Fantasy World is going for, and that’s a good thing! No game can capture the entire fantasy genre. :D
(No, I haven’t played FW yet. I read and study every game I bring to my table very thoroughly before I introduce it to my players. I noticed some typos and things I didn’t understand when I was reading through FW thoroughly for the first time, which is why I started reporting them to you here. I’m still studying FW.)
It doesn't really make a difference.
The idea is that the PC is being described as doing a thing... and at some point, someone at the table notices that such description fits the trigger of the move.
Be it at the beginning, during, or end of the preaching activity, is irrelevant. Also because, most probably, the description will not be as lengthy and detailed as to encompass the actual speech given.
Fictionally it could be as brief as "and I ask them to remember their better natures".
Or it could be "and I spend the next week preaching to the people of the village about X and Z and Y".
I mean, practically it can't happen any other way... After a description is offered to the table then someone will point out that it triggers the Lead the Flock move, at which point the mechanics will take effect, offering the Priest a number of holds to be spent "during the speech". Which could look like a simple mention of what the audience does as a result of the speech... or could look like something more detailed, as in "and when I mention Gargaroth that's when they go into a frenzy".
It's up to the table, and set up in a way as to offer maximum narrative freedom, after the minimum requirement of "describe the PC preaching to a crowd" has been met :)
If the move can trigger during a speech, or after a speech is described, then I would remove the phrase:
During the speech
from the move. Or replace it with the word “Then,” to emphasize that it happens after the first part. As it is, “during the speech” sounds like you have to spend your hold before the speech has ended. But, if you’re preaching to them for a few days, they may do these things between sermons, rather than in the middle of one.
Also, it was unclear to me that this move could be triggered once from a series of sermons (as opposed to triggered multiple times). If that’s the case, removing the immediate language of “during the speech” would make that more clear, I think.
