It's certainly a decent game. It's obvious that a lot of hard work and effort has been put in to make the world and the people in it. There's plenty of content to see and enjoy, and each character feels unique. There are many games that are completely finished or will force you to pay $20 or more for far less. For that, you should be commended.
However, the biggest issue I have is with the writing. On many *many* occasions where the writing is massively fluffed out, and
I'm unsure if it's to try and make the game stand out or someone's been
watching too many telenovelas, but any writing instructor worth their
salt will instill within you the importance of being able to 'cut the
fat'.
The main character in particular often feels disingenuous, and regardless of whether it's intentional or not it gives the impression that someone's taking it as an opportunity to try and vicariously prove how virtuous they themselves are through these empty moral platitudes that don't tell us anything (and aren't worth reading if I'm being brutally honest). For example, when first interacting with Elsa the MC launches himself into this banal rant about self-worth to a complete stranger, and you're instantly pulled out of the world because it has as much realism as an anti-drug PSA with Mr. T. If someone came up to me, went on a rant and told me to "live free", I'd soundly tell them to fuck off.
Whether this constructive criticism is taken on board or not, I wish you good luck in this endeavour and others in the future.