Thought you might've meant to put "weird" here instead of wired. Amazing work so far though!
I've barely even started and noticed many of the issues are with use of tenses. You overuse the past tense when English grammar triggers either subjunctive/conditional (which are moods and not tenses, but they do ignore tense) or infinitive (tenseless verb). I'm assuming your native language would conjugate in those instances, and it does in fact provide more information that the English system doesn't provide, but English just doesn't do that.