Cute character designs, colours and nice writing! The only things I noticed were that the protagonist/player didn’t have a lot if any inputs and it was more like reading a very linear novel, save for one or two choices. Which isn’t bad, but I feel like if players had more agency it would make for an even better experience!
Another thing I noticed was the transitions, they were quite slow and non-skippable (at least I haven’t figured out how to skip them or turn them off in settings) but they were quite tedious when I wanted to replay routes or see if I could get other dialogues by selecting different choices, but I am not sure how you’d go about adjusting that since this wasn’t made in Ren’py. It’s just something to keep in mind for future games too- maybe having an option to disable or speel/skip them?
Not sure, but this was really fun to play !