Clicking Back from the Loading Screen closes the Game.
The Main Menu also fades in really slowly.
Its some kind of medieval/fantasy setting from what I gather from the Intro text, but the first non-map screen looks like they're just wearing colored T-Shirts.
Typewriter lettersound starts halfway through? And it shows the Person I'm talking to instead of me talking? I don't play Visual Novels, but shouldn't there be a Picture of the Protagonist when he speaks?
The Text weirldy shifts what its talking about. First I'm talking about getting Ink, then I'm talking to myself and suddenly its an explenation of the Moon festival? Sure, we were just talking about it, but why cut off like that so suddenly?
The Art during the Moonstone ceremony explanation is great tho. More or less. It got the same feeling as classic medieval Art, but in a more simplified look, misisng some details. And then theres a bunch of dumb colors + shading applied on top of it. I know most of the actual medieval Art seen today is faded and withered and was more colorful back then, but not Airbrushed like those. I'm sure you could easily recreate a look like those Manuscripts easily with your Skills. And an entire Visual Novel in a similar style would be something more unique and interesting. Or some other 2D Game with a Style like that. Doesn't have to be a Visual Novel.
The Sprites for Fiona blend into each other weirdly when she changes expression.
Whats with the one time only loud and short Noise for the Crowd?
Wizard doesn't look remotely like a Wizard. Boring. And why does he hold a piece of Paper like that? That looks really weird.
Shouldn't the path to the ceremonial Pond and the Pond itself have some kind of decoration and people watching and stuff while you're going there? At least during the Festival.
Why does it say Thansk for playing and Ends after I'm being knocked down and had a little chat. I haven't done anything.
This isn't a Game, its more of a Picturebook. A Short one at that. With an uninteresting Story. I was just ready to get started on some kind of getting the Stone back adventure or something, but then it just ends.