Loading screen issue should be in the main page only but I'm aware of it.
I could maybe make first image more medieval.
Typewriter lettersound thing only happens when someone's talking to indicate both main character and other characters speaking, so no sound on internal dialogue.
In some visual novels there is a small portrait on the left bottom for mc expressions and in others there is larger ones and I've seen ones where there isn't any for mc except for the special scenes, decided to go with that to make it seem more first person.
I'm not the greatest writer so it was my first attempt at writing a story, jumping from market to moonstone festival explanation could've been done better, but mainly trying to develop my writing so I can put something more coherent.
I'll try to make the moonstone ceremony explanation more like a medieval manuscript, some of the art is rushed, story and characters were more important at that stage, idk about entire vn in the style of that tho. I think there's a game like that sort of a jrpg with manuscript look, can't remember the name.
Idk how to fix the sprite blending thing, you can time it but I like it to be bit slow, but maybe faster is better.
Marcellus is supposed to look bit goofy, might give him a bigger hat and more classic look maybe, in thefirst draft he was sort of a local shaman/healer than a wizard.
For the path my excuse was it didn't get crowded because ceremony is officially not happening, I should write something better for that part tho.
And it says thanks because the game is that short, it's my first attempt at vn and I wanted to try it like a 20 minute pilot episode which doesn't even take 20 minutes at the moment, but in the story you'll get to meet with king and queen and go back for the stone also to rescue princess from archwizard although he's not a bad guy. I basically need to develop my writing skills but thank you for the feedback!
Oh and some of the sound effects are from phoenix wright so that's why loud and low res.