I though this one was fantastically executed - it flowed well and managed to fit some action and an excellent character study into a thousand words without feeling cramped or forced!
Thanks SupNerds, your comments are super kind :). I cut loads down and was still worried about it feeling a little too cramped! Normally I'd write 1000 words as a short chapter not a full story! I think next time I'll go for a smaller concept. Good luck in the Jam
