I could gush about this story forever: Sea battle, sea serpant, pesky elves getting there comeuppance, beautiful descriptions and a lovely take on the OPR lore, well done!
I read the Dark Elf/ High Elf lore on the wiki and I *had* to do something with it; the colonization of the Dark Isles and the Dark Elves as rebels/ freedom fighters is a neat twist on the legacy concepts. All I did was flesh it out a bit. I'm glad you enjoyed it!