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Now that was just plain fun.

For a bit, I’d thought the Queen would be the main character, and thought the story should’ve started with the middle paragraph so as not to cut from the ending.

Was I wrong, though. Great twist!

Seems you and I both had ideas to subvert expectations on the whole “Str v Int” themes. 

I like your setting much better though, the conflict is better established, and the action was gripping.

… might have to steal thi- I mean, take inspiration from this for an adventure I create for the AoF RPG I’m developing.

Thank you - I'm glad the story entertained!

I do like to subvert expectations and play around with themes. It's the fun of trying to see something in a different way, for me. Or at least that's what I aim for.

(And steal away! It's not where you take things from, it's where you take them to!)

I love your sentiments on that matter.

Yeah, I’ll definitely be including this somewhere.

I’ll be taking a few things from this writing jam, actually. Love too much of it!