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I would like to pick the A. story (also counting on @Wasabi's A. story), it answers a lot of what I thought the Turbo Rabbit story would be, so much originality, well told, and it is also very similiar to my own Turbo Rabbit story.

This is a great idea making Michael feel like he doesn't know he is doing bad things, but continues to do it

Also, loving the idea for the gems trying to warn Michael for collecting them. But, my original idea for the gems is that the gems don't have any power on them, they won't affect Michael to collect them, but instead they will affect the island and the island's monsters, the monsters will go crazy if they realize the gem was stolen.

Gems will be only used to open the Big Door that would lead Michael to the biggest treasure, but that treasure is the most powerful thing that the "superior being" would push Michael away to grab it first. That's my finale story for Turbo Rabbit.

But, your story ideas are cool, so idk should I just take parts of yours or should I go for your story?

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You may be asked for credit if you take the whole story, or maybe special inspiration for taking parts of it. Do whatever feels right, and don't forget to exercise your own creativity! 

I will immediately sign people on the sheet for those who helped me, I'll gladly credit you all!