to a lot of people in these comments, ya'll need to keep your expectations and reality separate, and read other comments instead of rehashing stuff that has already been said.
This is a demo. it's not going to be perfect right off the back, and the author/creator has already commented several times they're working on it. the art is good, and the story even if rushed is fine. cut people some slack and enjoy what we have.
(Sorry if this is out of line, sir/ma'am author, just see a lot of the same comments saying the same thing over and over. you're doing great :) )