Hey,
This is what I have, so far. I don't think I quite understood what you meant about the ending, so could you listen to this and give me a bit more direction from that?
Also, re the low note at 3:47 under the G#, I just need a bit more clarification as to what you're looking for.
Finally, when you said 'make the track sound more like the airplane version (Link in next message) and don't repeat the same tune over and over', do you want it to have that super compressed 8-bit sound? The authentic crunchy low quality feel, or were you referring to something else? And as for 'don't repeat the same tune over and over', what does this refer to?
I'm really having a great time with this, and I appreciate your direct and insightful feedback - I just want to make sure I am doing it right!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xQfpNVAAvh684RNzYZAI4me6UEct36B_/view?usp=shari...
Thanks!
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