More things to add:
- On the last 4 notes of the track, make the octave higher in volume and remove the 80% to 100% volume at the end. (Do that or have the last 4 notes go from 80% to 90% in volume (Recommended) and make sure to do the last 4 notes and not the last 2 this time.)
- Try and copy 0:00-1:10 on the airplane version and make it 0:00-1:10 on the remix.
- 0:12-0:19 have an octave (Like the one at the end of the track) ascend in volume. At 6 notes played at around 0:20-0:23, make the octave go to 100% volume and then have the octave descend in volume to about the same volume as the main tune. (0:00-0:12) (And after 0:46-0:56, when the main tune comes back on, don't have the octave play.)
Clarification:
- When I said "Make the track sound more like the airplane version", I meant that as in both the sound and the parts from it.
- At 3:47, basically make the really low note (with low volume as well) ascend in pitch and volume.
- "Don't repeat the tune over and over", Don't repeat 0:00-0:12 or 0:46-0:56 too much. In the track you repeated it like 4 or 5 times.