Wow. Definitely couldnt tell you were dyslexic - the text seemed very well put together. Im trying to get use to game jams; I tried for the last 6 years but wasnt able to finish on time for them until after switching to godot in the last year because I put myself in my work and its hard to release something that just...isnt ready yet.
I think its cool that you wrote the story to help with your real-life issues. I think video games are one of the most expressive types of art - it is definitely the most interactive art mediums.
I went ahead and followed you. Im a fan of people who put their passion into their work and id like to see other work you do.
Thanks for poking your friend - Id love to hear her feedback. :)