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You're right about that one! Though "lab" could also refer to Labrador, a dog breed

Maybe Research Facility/Catility :3

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Good point!

No labs at all. Labs are way worse than rats.

In fact, that's something you never even mentioned in your story. Humans are all gone, but what happened to the dogs in Catopia?

Basically only Cats and other felines are left 

History left that part out, but after humans went extinct, all other species would soon follow, because felines love proteins

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OK. I am not going to argue the finer points of a feline utopia inhabited by anthropomorphized cats. 

Cats > Cat God > Aimless Studios. 

I'm just an onlooker ;)

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Maybe remove the word 'available' from the lists of all the disciples. Of course they are available. It's not like you would have a list of unavailable or absent disciples.

I say this looking at the first Devotion page where the bottom two lines stretch almost to the middle of the page.

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Good idea, it really takes up too much room

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Maybe also left-align all the writing and right-align all the numbers so it looks a bit neater.

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I'll have to check it to confirm, but afaik I already did that :)

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Another possible rewording. It says 'Homes Built.' In my mind, when someone builds a home, they intend it to be occupied by old people, orphans or children who misbehave. Shouldn't it be 'Houses Built'?

In my mind "Home" sounds more peaceful than "House", so Disciples will always have a place where they can return for meditation, prayer, etc.

As the saying house: "Home is where the heart is" :)

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I agree with all that, I am just thinking from a construction standpoint. The people who build will be making houses. They won't become homes until they are inhabited, and each one is only a home to one person or family, the rest are all houses.

But it doesn't really matter, it is just something that came up in class a few days ago. Home / House . One of the many things that is taught incorrectly in schools here. No one in China seems to know the word, 'person'. They always say people. But this comes from directly translating things as there are no plural nouns in Chinese just as there are no verb forms. Qu (Go) is the same whether it's me, you, them, past, present or future.

Grammar in Chinese is very simple, it's just  a shame that the reading and writing is a nightmare.