Nope, I don't mind. This is a fan-translation and you're doing this for free, so I don't expect it to be super 'professional', and translating this literally (word by word) is impossible anyway. But I will also add a disclaimer at some point that we are not responsible for any mistranslations, so people will know what to expect 🙂
I hope I understand you correctly: all names in this game remain in english, and everyone else has translated pronouns so far. I can show you how the simplified version was done.
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