itch.io

Really incredible, loved this one. 

Not sure I'm feeling the guitar loop as I feel it added a bit too much solidness to what was quite a texturally light. When that part first hit I was feeling it but I don't think it worked after a few times through the repetition, perhaps some variation as well as dropping in and out might help it? 

Realise I was starting with a a negative there, bit outside of that I really loved it, one of my favourites and there's very little else I'd change. The vibe it set was perfect and you were absolutely in command of the medium and it shows.

Favourite one I've heard so far! Thought it was incredibly well executed and the atmosphere, like where it took you, was perfect. Honestly nothing negative to say here (which I realise isn't very helpful lol) Is that recorder live? 

Thanks! Definitely hoping to give myself more time going forward with future ones though.

Thanks for this really detailed feedback, this is exactly the kind of stuff I need to progress.

 Mandolin was a bit of a carrying over from a very early draft when when it had a bit more of a slavic feel, I was then stuck in the situation where if it was removed that staticness you mentioned really set in. I'd probably have removed it if I had more time, but that's the beauty of doing stuff on tight deadlines sometimes. This is my first of these composition jams but it will definitely be appearing more in future. 

Everything you've said resonates though and I'll absolutely be trying to take it on board going forward.

Thanks for your feedback though and taking the time to listen, very excited to go through and listen to everyone elses.

Thanks! I won't lie, that scene with the goblins emerging from the seemingly abandoning Moria was definitely on my mind at certain points when working on this.