I love the artwork and the colourful design. Unfortunately I find it hard to read. I would suggest, that you increase the spacing. You can definitely be proud of yourself!
Thank you, much appreciated! I learned a lot during this jam, a lot of great publications have been submitted. I'll definitely plan the next project with more care and keep the scope much smaller so that I can focus on design and layout. Btw congrats, you have an awesome product!
Sure thing, the background limits the GMs in there own vision. I definitely try to keep that in mind for the next jam. I had some thing much bigger in mind and mismanaged time and scope of the project, thats why the layout is so inconsistent. Thank you
Hey thank you for the submission. I really like the illustrations and especially the map on pg 2. The layout is somewhat confusing though. I guess with a bit more time and experience you could make great adventures! The Character illustrations are awesome!!!
Thank you so much! I'm eager to play the Adventure! Illustrations, Artwork (especially the maps) and the Layout are great. This enhances the readability of this Adventure. Love it! It seems to be a classic dungeon crawl adventure with a twist.
