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I’m thankful for the free game and I hope that what I’m going to say will sound like constructive criticism, instead of whining.

The “semi-profile” view of the area makes it hard to know when to press Space to pull girls into the lockers, and for some reason the timing is even trickier in this game than in your earlier games.

The other games had “generic” characters. I think this works better than having a market full of copies of the same waifus, the waifus should “feel” special. IMO each waifu should appear once a day, and catching her should give you some bonus.

Esc should close any and all pop-ups, and bring up the menu if there’s no pop-up.

It is not clear at all why higher shelves would be better.

It feels wrong to have girls who climaxed to report you, as they see other girls leaving the locker.

Instead of “click here to continue” between days, it would be better to click anywhere on the screen to proceed. Or, if you must require clicking a specific area of the screen, make it look like a button.

“Speed up” should be something that you hold down, not a clickfest.

Catching the exact same girl multiple times is fun. Specially when she shows some progression: ragged clothes, fluids, swelling…

Feature suggestion: fertilisation. It doesn’t need to be fancy; just an image/animation pop-up of an ovum being surrounded by sperm cells, and pierced by one. If it’s uncommon enough, and associated with some bonus, it gets really nice. (Bonus points if the same girl pops up the next days, with a preg belly.)

I won’t suggest to have the tentacles climaxing because I bet that you have it planned out anyway.

Finally, I get that the Unity fiasco forced you guys to change the engine, but if you concentrated the dev time into a single game, the end result would be probably great. (And it would sell better too.)

When I started playing this game, I wasn’t expecting it to be so good.

The girls are a lot different from each other, not just in looks but also personality. And their personality doesn’t feel flat or overly complex, it’s just the right amount of.

[Theory] It seems to me like they don’t long for a house, but a home. The MC materialises the house of his childhood, when he lived with parents and siblings; Azraesha masks it well but it’s clear that she feels lonely; Naomi feels like her gyals backstabbed her; Cait is an orphan, Lyriel exiled, Yona got into a succession war with her brother, Blair trusts nobody. So perhaps the best ending ever was if they found a way to stabilise the house in the rift, but still allow people to go back and forth, without the pull? I’d love to see it happening.

I think that it’s genuine because games without an Android port always get a flood of messages like “ANDRAID VERSON WEN? Y THEIRS NO ANDROYD PORT? U HADE ANDROID OR WUT?”.

Don’t forget: crapawa shitjo is not a game

People here won’t get this 4chan meme.

Don’t be fooled by the fact that this game is made in Ren’Py. This is that sort of game that you play for hours, and when you look outside it’s already dawn.

Yandere? You got it. Cheating girlfriend? Yup. Adopted sister? Yes. Vanilla gamer girl, a fierce punk full of tattoos, a spoiled daddy’s girl, that hot and spicy co-worker… the girls “feel” really different from each other. And it isn’t just on dialogue, they behave in a different way. (For example, Samantha will leave you if she finds you cheating on her. Sasha will hate your guts but she’s still amenable. Kylie, though… well.)

The game has a wiki. And you’ll probably need it if you’re trying to be a megachad and fuck’em all. That isn’t the only way to play the game though, if you want something more vanilla you could also chase and marry a single girl.

So, if you’re considering if you should buy this game: in my opinion it’s worth every single penny. The devs were nice enough to provide a demo though; it has less girls, but it gives you a good idea on how it plays like.

I got a similar exception! I had no older saves (they were manually deleted), and can reproduce the error rather reliably:

1. Start a new game. Don’t skip ahead. Other options are irrelevant.
2. Talk with Sonya, Reina, Ryuji, the Ava crowds. Then let Morrison talk.
3. Click the circular arrow twice. On the first time it’ll bring up the map as expected. On the second it triggers the exception.

From some quick websearch it seems that Ren’Py is trying to remove an element that doesn’t exist yet. If that’s correct odds are that this bug only triggers at the start.

I love this game and I’ve been playing it a lot through the last few days, even if my cells always end as the microbian version of carnivorous plants.

A few issues+ideas, in no specific order:

Nitrogen fixation is pretty much pointless, since you still need to explore for phosphate. Perhaps making ammonia less common and/or introducing phosphate-leaking rocks could solve this.

Chloroplasts are annoying to align inside the cell, as they lack vertical symmetry. I wish that they could be rotated.

Objects spawn inside your cell if you move really fast, and your cell is large. It’s specially annoying for harmful objects (like spiky microorganisms, or needles in the ice sheet).

Not sure if intended gameplay, but I’ve been dealing with toxin-producing cells by spamming lysosomes. Faster digestion = less harm. It’s simply less bothersome than firing my own toxins at them.

The AI organisms love weird-shaped cells at the detriment of their speed. I wish that they had a higher chance to mutate organelle placement.

I get that the distinction between genera gets messy for asexual organisms, but the way that the game decides “this shall be a new genus!” or “nah, just a new species in the same genus” randomly is really weird.

With all of that said, the core gameplay loop is damn solid. And I love how the game often forces you to adopt a niche for your microorganism - a secondary energy source is fine, but if you try to become a jack-of-all-trades, you’ll often end extinct.

In this context, it means that Lyx has now a bunch of pictures that can be combined for her sprite in different positions or expressions.

I don’t like NTR either but it’s extremely easy to avoid it, since all decisions leading to NTR are tagged. Like this:

I don’t think that a point-and-click interface is boring. That said, there are other options, but they all involve simplifying things - such as 2D side scrolling, or a top down view.

Another overcomplication is to allow items to be thrown anywhere. That sounds like a good idea in theory but in practice it means that the player needs to aim to throw the items in the cauldron or the summoning circle.

Wait, the evocation will get a voice record? That’s awesome!

Worst hypothesis it’s fine to leave it with broken grammar, specially if fixing it would incur in additional costs. It isn’t like it affects the game, or that most people would even notice. And it’s still funny either way. (Like, Naomi going full “where’s my good boy?”)

And… yeah, Google Translate hates Latin. I usually recommend Yandex + manual proofreading for the language.

Based on the demo: interesting premise with overcomplicated implementation. A simpler, click-based interface would be way, way better.

The Latin used when Naomi evokes Brimstone is understandable but broken. She’s trying to call him a good boy and stuff like this, isn’t she?

The following would be better: Ab igne infero, opus est canis bonus. Ubi est catulus meus, canis est puer bonus meus. Quam bonus est.

Translated: From the fire below, the good dog is necessary. Where’s my puppy, the dog is my good boy. How good [of a boy].

Oh shit. It has Aqua. Downloading it now. I’ll leave some feedback later on.

EDIT: okay… this is fun. Most girls have little to no H scenes, but the current scenes are hot as fuck. Picking a few characters from other series than KonoSuba (like Ram+Rem from Re:Zero, Ghislayne and Roxy from MT, etc.) was a good idea. Megumi being 90% useless, 10% awesomeness is accurate as fuck. Darkness is basically there to be abused.

It’s great to know!

On a lighter side, I loved a lot of things in your game, too:

• The very idea behind the game is fun. It’s like a simplified Stardew Valley with lots of fetish!
• Their designs are great. Clearly relat… err “landlady and tenants”, but still distinct enough to feel different from each other, in both personality and looks. And, well, for this kind of game that is what matters the most!
• The story is fun. And the way that some characters handle is sensible. Specially Isabella, trying to dig further info about the goddesses, gamify the system, and yet being influenced by them (that “welcome, human…” is hilarious).
• Tying faster pregnancy with faster crop growth was really clever. Specially with the cat foreshadowing it.
• The balance of crop sacrifice might be off, but the idea is fun. It forces the player to plan out things, because mindlessly destroying crops will get you penniless, but once balanced not doing it will sound like a waste too.
• The two big resource sinks (car and cheese refrigerator) sound reasonable.

Damn, this game is complex. The good way of complex, that makes you try stuff and then go back.

About itch.io policy changes: I’ve seen a few games working around this, by making the mother “landlady” and the sisters “room-mates” by default, but letting players pick the actual relationship. You’ll see this e.g. in Tamas’ Awakening and My Family Farm. It could be a good way to be able to commercialise your game here again, or at least for future projects.

Back into the game: Bella goes 180° from a pain to a sweetheart. I love it. I also love how all four have very distinct personalities and looks, and you still can hook up with other girls.

Overall I enjoyed the game. I’ll focus on criticism because I believe that it’s more helpful.

• The mechanics are interesting but they get old really fast. Most of them need some balancing.
• Money is hard to get at the start but becomes too abundant past day 100 or so.
• When your max energy is still low, it’s awful to get forced cutscenes, since they waste precious energy as soon as you leave your room. Specially bad when you need to milk your cows, as you won’t get the milk.
• Sacrificing crops is not worth the trouble. And it’s balanced in a way that encourages busy-work, because sacrificing 10 crops 10 times is better than sacrificing 100 crops once. (Tested with rice.)
• Being unable to produce more than two batches of cheese is IMO a silly restriction.
• Requiring the cows to spend most of the day soaking sunlight is extremely annoying, specially since pressing “wait” makes the game skip straight to the night (so you won’t get their milk.)
• The cost for power apples increases too fast. It’s still reasonable up to 900, harsh at 2700, “I won’t bother” at 8100.
• Most girls need repeatable sex scenes. Specially Isabella, it’s weird how you get to fuck her once but then the only repeatable scene is one with a sex toy.
• The spermatozoa+ovum scene is nice to see only if the girl is getting pregnant. Otherwise it’s pointless.
• Please, get some proofreading. In special, you have a tendency to conjugate “do” alongside the main verb; for example writing “did you tried” instead of “did you try”.
• Bianca’s cow spots could use a rework. The one on her face looks like a burn, not like a cow spot. And the ones on the breasts have a completely different colour.

So far I’ve enjoyed it quite a bit. Here’s a few highlights, after playing v0.3.

The game is great at pulling your emotional strings. The intro song is beautiful, the creepy scene makes you feel uncomfortable, “I have a degree in Psychology and I couldn’t figure her out” makes you laugh, Natsumi accepting herself is heartwarming. It’s currently light on H content but I understand that it’s an early version.

I like the MC’s lack of self-control. It plays well with the VN genre, where the players themselves have such a weak control over the actions of the MC.

Is Nova a hallucination? Is she real? I love how well this plays with the protag’s issues.

The user interface is visually cluttered, and I feel like most buttons there could be merged. In my humble opinion, something like this would work well:

• Visual indicator of the time of the day at the top right. Clicking it should skip time (so you don’t need to go to the bed for that.) It’s where most interface elements are.
• Day of the week right below that indicator.
• Map button right below the above. It would be great if its menu allowed you to go to a specific room/area of the uni/house, without relying on that bottom “window” to do so.
• Quest button right below it.
• “Engine” button below it. Clicking it would bring up a menu with the following tabs: settings; save game; load game; history, including a “memories” button; and the current contents of the lotus menu. Pressing Esc could bring this menu up, on the last tab, so you’d get more visibility for your links (“rate this game”, Discord channel, etc.) Keyboard shortcuts for each tab would be really nice.
• “Back”, “auto” and “skip” buttons. Or dunno, they could be placed inside the menu above, they could be included into the “settings” tab of the menu proposed above.

This is based on playing the game from a computer but, if the mobile interface is similar, I believe that it would improve it too (since space is at premium on a phone screen). Specially because the art of the game is pretty, so the least amount of things between you and the art, the better.

Should I feel bad for hating the principal?

Oh, that explains it. Thank you for the reply! (And for the game, too. I don’t usually look for lore in porn games, but the lore of this one made me pleasantly surprised. Plus Jan’s gentle dom-ness, it’s refreshing and it fits well a vamp)

Can’t unlock scene between “Dragon in the Purse” and “Safer Sex”. Any hint how?

it seems like the dev wants to use trust issues to disempower men or something

It seems like the dev wanted to make a game with cute demon girls. Everything else is assumption.

I’ve played through the demo, it has a reasonable amount of content, enough to give you a good idea on what to expect.

[+] Lily’s design is great - cute and sexy at the same time. Voice acting is top, it makes her sound friendly but slightly pampered. Well animated, and overall I like the sex scenes.

I like the pacing. Protag lacks a backbone but that’s a given for a 20yo virgin. Over time it seems to me that he gets more comfortable with Lily and vice versa.

The game works well in Linux but that’s to be expected from Ren’Py games.

[-] Most decisions feel flat; mostly “save before decision, pick one option, see scene, reload”. The major exception is college vs. work, as depending on which you pick you’ll get one or another ~half of the scenes.

Some scenes have the same issue as porn with RL people - you want to see the woman but the man’s butt gets in the way.

[YMMV] Cuckoldry content: I don’t like it but some people do, and it’s easy to avoid. There’s no PoV or single action scene, at least in the demo.

I wish that the nipple piercing and womb tattoo were optional. I’m not a big fan of them, but again - some people love this stuff.

A X-ray mode would be also great.

So overall I liked it quite a bit for a demo. I’m actually considering to buy the full version once more girls are added.

Cuteness overload.

The best way is to drink some strawberry juice and go upstairs in school. You’ll start the “photogenic” quest. When you get into the nursery, open the curtains and take the pic.

There’s a second way: when Lindsey crashes on you (tour of school quest), offer to call the nurse. The rest is similar as to the photogenic quest.

1. Check for stocks priced lower than $3~5 or so. If you find one, save your game.
2. Check if the stocks lower to $1. If they don’t, reload. If they do, save.
3. Invest all your money in those stocks. Save.
4. Check if the stocks rise sharply in price. If they don’t, reload. If they do, sell all of them and save.
5. Repeat as needed.

Refer to this post.

The “good” ending is #2, so you already got it. You’re probably referring to #3 instead:

1. Visit the church.
2. Wait at least 12h, visit it again between 17:00 and 20:59.
3. Visit it again in the following day. Choose to help Shanice with FF.
4. Visit it again in the day after.
5. Tell Shanice to listen to FF.

Two ideas:

1. “Pull out” button while sexing Jun. Just for convenience; upon clicking the button it changes the sex mode to “manual”, and removes your dick from her. Specially useful if changing positions; pulling out manually has some awkward control on windowed mode.
2. Clothing categories when buying or equipping stuff. Search is useful, but sometimes it’s a mess to find what you want, and it’s useful to be able to see (for example) all stockings + stocks together and nothing else.

Which ending are you talking about? There are multiple endings, and they’re all bad.Check this post for a list of them, it should be obvious how to avoid them.

De qual final fala? Há vários finais, e são todos ruins. Veja o link que te passei, há uma lista deles, e fica claro como evitá-los. Vou traduzir o post com os finais aqui:

1. Vender o bot - depois da 1ª transmissão, um tal de bigdaddy manda-te um e-mail, querendo comprar a Jun (tua robozinha) por 10k. Venda-a.
2. Despejado - quando o senhorio aparece cobrando o aluguel, basta não ter dinheiro vivo (ações e tokens não contam) e você vai para a rua.
3. Fracasso - seja babaca com a Jun a ponto dela parar de falar contigo. Daí quando a outra streamer ataca-te, a Jun não vai defender-te, e você morre.
4. Covarde - quando a outra streamer atacar-te, saia correndo. Ela destruirá a Jun.
5. Inanição - é só deixar de comer. O escritor original do post crê que isso também acontece quando você pergunta à Jun se ela pode comer, mas eu não sei.
6. Seja pego… - atire no lixo partes da Jun sem falar com o bigdaddy primeiro. Será pego pelo FBI.
7. Não sou maluco… - se mental_health≤0.3, day≥16, e sympathy≥500, aparece uma opção de conversa nova com a Jun. Escolha “calm down”. Daí vá dormir com a saúde mental (mental health) baixa.
8. Parede-kun - zere tua sanidade, daí começa a achar que a Jun é horripilante, e que não dá mais. Daí começa a gritar com a Jun, e com tua mãe (que nem tá lá), e com teu pai (que tá morto), daí decide bater a cabeça na parede até… que os créditos apareçam.

Gung’f nyfb jung V guvax. Rkprcg gung, vafgrnq bs gur ahefr be Znkvar, gur ZP jbhyq nfx sbe Zef. Y naq/be Zre’f uryc (V guvax gung fur’f gur bar jub pnhfrq gur svefg gvzr ybbc).

This is just my conjecture, but I don’t think that she’s gone, I think that the devs will eventually create some scene where you get rid of the doll, before she can influence Lindsey to go.

It’s for Lindsey (the fit and cheerful blonde). For the Dead Girl’s Score scene.

Eryrinag qrgnvy: Yvaqfrl genpxf n guveq inevnoyr orfvqrf ybir naq yhfg: vg’f ungr. Creuncf vg’f hfrq gb qrpvqr ure riraghny sngr?

Tvira gung gur tnzr nyernql unf gvzr geniry, creuncf fur qvrf va guvf gvzryvar, ohg lbh’er nyybjrq gb gvzr ybbc naq cerirag ure qrngu haqre n srj pbaqvgvbaf.

I’ll use ROT13 because other people might not want the spoilers, OK?

Yvaqfrl whzcf bss gur ebbsgbc naq qvrf, nzvqfg gur ynfg dhrfg (rvgure Vfnoryyr’f “Qrguebavat gur Dhrra” be Xngr’f “Fgrccvat ba gur Ebfr”). Fur’f pyrneyl orvat pbagebyyrq, fnlvat fbzrguvat yvxr “syl… syl gb gur zbba…”. Gur tnzr raqf jvgu nzohynaprf naq n “gb or pbagvahrq” zrffntr.

Vg’f fcrpvnyyl hcfrggvat vs gur cebgnt vf ebznapvat Yvaqfrl, orpnhfr gura gur cynlre vf sbeprq qverpg uvz gb gur ebbsgbc naq gel gb fnir ure. Vg snvyf, ohg lbh frr ure whzcvat sebz ernyyl pybfr.

I actually enjoyed it quite a bit. It takes balls to include this stuff in a hentai game.

Water the nurse’s bonsai tree with some random soda before dating Jacklyn.

Suggestion: list names of locked galleries and feats/achievements. Only the names - because then it’s easier to look for further info, when trying to unlock both.

The bonsai tree and statement quests are pre-requisites. I think that you also need the book from Maxine’s desk.

Not surprised. Rats are basically beavers in disguise.

I like the fact that I got both from this game. Plus scenes that make me wank and feel bad after it.