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Glad you enjoyed! HD is Hit Dice: generally speaking, something as Hit Points equal to Hit Dice times four or five. Best.

Real well done! Eminently useable. Nice restrained layout that prioritises referencing. Fun situations to engage with, and 'players' to play against each other. A good sized dungeon that doesn't stretch on.

Possibly the only thing (and this is minor) is to swap the 'intro' and the NPC descriptions around. I don't know who Alaxoon and Eleg-maph are until the following spread.

Extremely excited to see more. You got this! Remember: Real Artists Ship.

Haha thanks! Get excited for the next two: the ancient forest of Ladywood, and the ruined citadel of Edgbastion....... It's very silly......

A great scenario and hook that is actually delivered upon, as so rarely this type of idea is. You can't sight-read this with no prep (partly due to the premise), but it's still eminently useable. Wonderful art. Excited to see more.

Very good. Inspired scenario. Great hook. Certainly useable. I honestly think the coloured pages subtract: bit of a pain to print, and also make it more difficult to actually read.

Very good. This is eminently useable. I would certainly use this! I personally understand why you've presented and done the layout like you have (and I'm often sceptical of wacky layouts), and actually think it's beneficial here.

Well done. Real slick. Every detail I'd have to make up on the fly, you've got an answer for here. Balances psychological journey with dungeon well. Love the room size examples.

Ah! Thank you!

Thank you for the guidance! I'll see what I can do.

Hey! I'm currently putting together a submission and felt that it would  save your time and ease the load on volunteers if I did the layout myself. I've got a few questions. First, how much creative liberty can be taken with the layout (inserting pictures, colour schemes, and so on) - basically, are we aiming for something relatively subdued or are we going all the way up to MORK BORG? Second, do you have recommendations for appropiate tools to do layout in? I've always just used Google Docs - is that sufficient here? Thanks.

wow i cannot stress enough that you should be proud of what you've created here - this has really affected me deeply.

you've really diagnosed some of the illnesses that afflict these kinds of spaces. It makes me think of all the young disaffected/atomized people stuck inside right now turning into some of these characters. 

the car ride sequence was the highlight of this and just emotionally devastating to me as someone who's heard/experienced every single part of the conversation(s) before. I think the fact that it's presented so earnestly (almost as if you're just holding up a mirror) makes it so impactful. it made me smile a bit.

i've tried one of your other games and saw that the pacing/cutting technique is a consistent stylistic flair - i think its very strong and allows you to explore all of these different ideas without being clumsy.

you're really talented; no one has ever managed to (not to be cliche but) make art about this very particular and niche experience (referring specifically to the car ride sequence, but also more generally to the western hikikomori/nazi types). 

thanks for putting this out and i can't wait to see what you do in the future.