Very good entry ! I love the writing and the art, kinda reminds me of The Red Strings Club in a way, very wholesome ! I was uncomfortable with butchering the client but I think it's just because I'm a bad player x) The music is really cool too !
Really nice for a first game, well done ! I like the look of the character ;) I hope you had a nice time making it, so that your gamedev journey continues !