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Strenght vs Inteligenz - Orks vs Battle Brothers jam comments · Posted in Strenght vs Inteligenz - Orks vs Battle Brothers jam comments
Good premise, but lacks subtlety. Show, don't tell. Let your readers figure the theme out for themselves. The unbeatable and awesomely awesome battle brothers trope is also done to death.
But, saying all that, you wrote something and submitted it for other people to see and give feedback on. That's really awesome and I'm genuinely looking forward to what you write next🙂
No Beating a Concussive Retort - OPR Writing Jam #7 Submission jam comments · Posted in No Beating a Concussive Retort - OPR Writing Jam #7 Submission jam comments
The Captain's No Good, Very Bad Day jam comments · Posted in The Captain's No Good, Very Bad Day jam comments