You use the "urgency" concept and "time passing" in a storytelling very well my friend. When it gets closer to the final, i felt some anxiety. This is good writing, and the characters & theirs dialogues was well made.
I like it very much! Excelent!
Thanks a lot! And i know the reason behind why you get a little cofusing. It's because i firstly wrote on my mother language, which is portuguese, and i translate quickly to english. Maybe some wrong translation or inadequate vocabulary was used. Sorry for that.
Anyaway thanks! It was an immense pleasure to know you liked the game.
I like your game. But i need to be honest to you. If there is someone that is bullying you, it's youself.
Humility is different from Low Self-Esteem, so don't let you bully yourself. In the same way don't think that you have achieved the highest peak of the wisdom or knowledge.
It's from the small things made by huge efforts that came the apprenticeship. Some day you will learn how to code. Some day you will learn how to draw. Some day you will know how to create amazing stories. But all this depends on you.
That's my considerations. I hope this serves you in some way...
By the way, i love the music. Incredible job! :)
Sorry i didn't figure out what is going on... even make various attempts. But now seeing the response below at Kevin Hill comment, i now understand it.
So in puzzle games it is better to start with very easy level, just to make the player understand the mechanics. And i think the other thing that can i suggest is more sfx or music or both..
Anyways, well done, it's rare to see some "pure" puzzle games at jams, it always adventure thing and etc...