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cheers!

Thanks for that - very helpful!  I also enjoyed the Retrospective with you reflecting on the process - very interesting.

I had hoped to give enough info that if Dhoukhi Rides Again did go off piste there'd be enough there for a Referee to have a sense of how things might go, but thanks for your honesty in mentioning that, it's worth me bearing in mind for the future.  One note: please can you correct my surname to 'Collinson'?  Cheers!

Nicely put together and designed.  Would be hard to engage some players with the central 'revenge' but this does an amazing amount in a limited space and is very clear with good timer mechanic.

Really like the dual nature of this doing a great deal in a small space.  

Lovely idea and terrific map.  Overall a good design and really fun idea.

I love the random motivation table which is excellent at being suitable for the character type.  Good design although a little small in places and I thought 'Hollow' was interesting.

I love the random motivation table which is excellent at being suitable for the character type.  Good design although a little small in places and I thought 'Hollow' was interesting.

Lovely minimalist station design but still 'atmospheric'.  A fun sandbox and I'm particularly enamoured of the flashback idea.

Very clear and nicely put together.  It's really inviting to both read and play with an interesting NPC and locations with a lovely set of 'rival crews'.

Clever system neutral adventure all on one page with a (nice?!) horror threat growing and good ship design for such a limited space.

Very nice design and despite being on one sheet, not too small along with fun ideas which make me want to engage with it.

Nice idea with the characters as 'bots and they're well executed.  Lovely ship design gives a sense of place.

Great graphics complement an adventure that would work well as a one-shot and keep the tight pace moving.

Nicely captures the feel of The Expanse and good layout with interesting ideas.

Nicely increases the threat and tension with some nice, humorous details.

Excellent use of the setting, well thought out and ideas that make me want to give this a go.  Great to see it.

Wonderfully random in a limited space.  It looks fun.

Hi there, thanks for the comments.

On the first, the second paragraph says that it's for a vargr character and although there is a preset,  strictly, it doesn't have to be him and could be your own.  The only important thing is that he's on the run with various factions interested in chasing him down.  But you're right, it could have been stated more clearly as it's not until the prologue text in the adventure itself that you really find this out.  I assume I can edit the text, so I'll do so - thank you.

As for the second, yes and no.  The image was created by an AI art program from prompts aiming to generate a vargr and was posted over on a Traveller art Facebook page.  There the likeness to a shady brother of Paddington was noted.  As I have no artistic ability, had nothing else to illustrate the adventure, and found itch.io (which is new to me) rather wanted one, I asked the original poster if I could use the image and he was amenable.  While I could have lived without him looking *quite* so much like Paddington, I rather like the rough hewn look  and the hat pulled low to hide some of his features!